Magyar – Chapter 1, Page 5

The public address system continues to address the public. One gets the idea that he’s perfectly happy to not be traipsing off to war with the rest of the crew. He seems to have no concern whatsoever that the barbarians may be just as hungry as he.

***Transcript***

Panel 1 Different view of Theodoric and the crowd.

THEO: WE HAVE HEARD THAT THE MAGYAR ONCE AGAIN ENCROACH UPON OUR LAND.

Panel 2 Closeup of Theodoric from crowd POV. He is almost an inset to Panel 1. Crowd is OP.

THEO: BUT WITH THE BARON AND HIS LIEGE FELLOWS, THE BARBARIANS WILL BE SOON HEADED BACK EAST TO THEIR GOD–FORSAKEN HOMELAND, IF THEY HAVE SUCH A THING.
CROWD: (GENERAL CHEERS)

Panel 3 Theodoric in primary focus, still speaking, happy for the positive reinforcement. Gonzago and Meinfrid are also in the shot, so as to be the secondary focus at the back of the crowd. Buildings behind them all.

THEO: I SHALL, OF COURSE, REMAIN HERE TO MAKE CERTAIN THE BARON’S BUSINESS CONTINUES IN HIS BRIEF BUT NECESSARY ABSENCE…

***End Transcript***


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  1. James E. Lyle

    Thanks to everyone who stopped by my table at Fanaticon this past Saturday! It was great to meet you all, but kind of a blur too. So if I don’t recognize you the next time we meet, it’s not your fault. Hope a bunch of you who picked up fliers will be stopping by to see how this story turns out. Look for me (Lord willing) at HeroesCon, June 4-6 in Charlotte, NC.

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